Tuesday, November 5, 2013

final blog post

Click here to go to my character post.  This post is one of my best posts because it really explains how she changes in the start of the book.  In the post it says, "she always thought she would just end up being in the class called abnegation."  This really shows the starting feeling that she has in the book.  Later, my post says, "She went with the dauntless at the ceremony."  This is explaining that once she finally had that big decision of her lifetime, she really didnt do what her parents would want or even what she thought she had wanted just a little earlier in the book.  I think that in this post, I made this clear.  At the start, she only cared about what her family would think of her, and now she is doing what she wants to do.
 My goals for the next trimester are to read a book every month, I will have a lot more time without marching band.  If my teacher doesn't make us write, I won't do it in my free time.  I'm not very good at annotating, thus I will want to get a lot better at that, even though I don't like to.  I really want to be able to write longer pieces and not get bored or completely to broad on the topics. that is something I wish to get better at.